If the main part of my memoir was at ozzfest I could slow down and mainly focus on it by adding more things about it in detail. This would make the story impact the reader more or let them know how cool ozzfest was.
Walking in to Ozzfest I saw people calling their friends, "ya...i am here...at the main gate....OK coming." they said as they looked around like a scared, lost, child because they didn't really know were they're friends are.
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